RedBird

This goes really well with the painting (which I love). The description and imagery were beautiful and entirely believable. However, there was just one thing that really bugged me. The ...

Hey there, RedBird here for a review! Okay, for the most part, I'd say that I enjoyed this poem. The rhyming, I think, worked well, and your rhythm usually stayed ...

This really drew me in, at the beginning. It was very well thought out, I can see. Firstly, on the ninth line of the first stanza, I think you meant ...

This poem has some great ideas, and if you work on it some more, it will really work well. I think this has already been said, but the first stanza ...

Okay...I liked this, I really did. Nelson Mandela is a great subject for a poem. The rhyming is fairly good, but, as Kamas said, the way you spaced the lines ...

Hey, RedBird here for a review, Okay, let's cut straight to the chase: I like the ideas, but they weren't presented very well. The rhythm was off, and there were ...

I have to say, I liked this poem. I could truly get a sense for the setting and characters. A few things, however: "the dandelions mature-whiskery and skinny as hobos ...

I absolutely love the Hunger Games! Although I do have to say that it was a mite predictable at times. I was looking up auditions, as well, but I couldn't ...

First of all, I'd like to congratulate you on this poem. It's quite intriguing and interesting. The imagery was pretty good, but it could get beefed up a wee bit ...

Astounding! The imagery in this poem was some of the best I've ever seen, and the rhythm was quite smooth, for the most part. The only thing that was an ...

As far as poetry goes, I think that this poem was pretty good, but had some things that you could easily fix up. For example, I believe that you could ...

This is an interesting poem. I think the fact that you didn't use a bunch of punctuation makes it a little bit more eye drawing and unique. I do think ...

Wow. That was great to read after a cold, windy day. Really warmed me. It's great that you managed to write a sonnet that had the right number of syllables ...