RedAlice427

Your poem states not only the truths about people but how some have fears that are based on how others will think about them. You are brave and courageous enough ...

This poem...brought back good and bad memories of my past partners. One person who I cared deeply did the same things as you stated in your poem. I loved the ...

This poem almost made me cry both inside and out. The way you expressed your feelings towards a girl who you never met before shows what makes a human. It's ...

Dude! You're so deep, I can't even see you anymore! This is probably the best emotional poem I've read. The vision of the poem touched my heart that I could ...

I like the way you were going with this story. Little detail is needed but all in all it's pretty good. How the guys have yellow eyes and how the ...

This story sent chills up my arms. Everything about it was amazing and I couldn't stop myself from finishing it to the end. With such detail and imagery, I felt ...

I like the way that you're going with this but in my opinion, a little more detail would bump this story up a notch. Zombies are awesome but when you ...

The ending was amazing when the main character attacked Nicole out of the blue. That was something I wasn't ready for but the blood part was my favorite (a little ...

I love this story. It's so detailed and the visionary of it is so captivating that I want to read it again and again. Though it was in third person, ...