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Re: He Buried His Wife in The Unmarked Grave
Thank you for requesting a review! I'm thankful to have seen this work. I really like it! I feel its biggest strength is the dialogue and the characterization. A lot ...
Nov 23, 2021 -
Re: More Than A Machine (Chapter 1: L'othaim's Rebellion)
Ah yes, mad scientist accidentally becomes a dad: one of my favorite tropes. Anything that has to to with found family dynamics are my favorite tropes to be honest. The ...
Nov 19, 2021 -
Re: Lucky Stars
This story was so, so beautifully worded. My god I love it! The imagery is so poetic. It kind of reminds me of the older works like Jane Austin, although ...
Nov 17, 2021 -
Re: Mad
Hey Forever! Been a while! I think this might be the first time I've ever reviewed one of your works, so let's get to it. I have to admit this ...
Nov 13, 2021 -
Re: The Clockwork Witch, chapter one
This is a very interesting first chapter! I'm looking forward to seeing more! Some points I'd like to make though. I felt kind of...thrust into the world? What I mean ...
Nov 8, 2021 -
Re: Never Forget - 14 Hours, and 28 Minutes
This is such an interesting premise! Very, very unique! The Eye gives me Cthulhu vibes, and the infected whisperers give me birdbox vibes. I noticed a few grammatical errors throughout ...
Sep 3, 2021 -
Re: Blood Sisters (Ch. 1) Alice
I discovered some of your more recent chapters, so I read this and the prologue. I'm very interested in this story so far! I love Alice. Despite her age, she's ...
Sep 2, 2021 -
Re: Weight
I really loved this short story! You're remarkably good at writing! I've never had much difficulties with my weight but I can certainly relate to the self-hated Julia faces. The ...
Sep 1, 2021 -
Re: Weight
I really loved this short story! You're remarkably good at writing! I've never had much difficulties with my weight but I can certainly relate to the self-hated Julia faces. The ...
Sep 1, 2021 -
Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 2]
Once again, excellent chapter filled with great characterization and descriptions. No nitpicks to speak of. I really like Rieka. Her life is such a huge contrast with Prince Ambrose's, yet ...
Aug 30, 2021 -
Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 1]
I have to say, you're really, really good at writing! The descriptions, the dialogue, the characterization is just mwah! Perfecto! I honestly can't find a single thing to nitpick in ...
Aug 30, 2021 -
Re: The Revolutionaries Chapter One: Malvis
I like this story quite a bit! There's a lot of mystery surrounding this chapter, we don't know a lot about the world and the chunks of info only bring ...
Aug 22, 2021 -
Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 2: "The...Child?"
Coming back for another chapter. Not disappointed in the slightest. Hasda's grown a lot, but is still a bit of a troublemaker I see. I'm excited to see how he ...
Aug 19, 2021 -
Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 1: "The Child"
Found your most recent chapter, and decided to read the first one. Retired God adopts mortal child? Yes. Absolutely. Breathtaking. I love it. Some things I've noticed is that there ...
Aug 17, 2021 -
Re: The New World Order - Prologue
This is a really intriguing story. Are we really going to see both options based on the last sentence? Because that would be cool! There are no real grammar mistakes ...
Aug 16, 2021
