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Re: Countdown
This is a most unique and different approach to writing. It has been written very beautifully and I can really see your mastery of words in this poetic story. Plot ...
Jul 24, 2010 -
Re: Heal.
Yes, I love this story. I'm going to look forward to reading the rest of this story, if you are continuing it. Plot : 8/10 The plot was great and ...
Jul 24, 2010 -
Re: Blackout Forever -- Chp. 2-Part 1
I've really enjoyed reading the story so far. Rachel, your speaker, should describe more about what is actually going on instead of just telling what she's thinking. Like what Jetpack ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: The Dead Squad
We stood expectantly. All nineteen martyrs that we should have been waited in silence, sweat dribbling from our filthy heads to run through the creases of our soiled fatigues. In ...
Jul 21, 2010 -
Re: Light and Darkness
Many, many years ago a tail tale of the forces of Light and Darkness began. It started at the beginning of time. There was a white bull, so full of ...
Jul 21, 2010
