-
Re: The Candlemaker
Who knew I was going to read such an emotional story today?! The Candlemaker is a tragic figure, but he is also incredibly exasperating. He spent ten years ignoring his ...
Apr 14 -
Re: A piece of Star Wars fan fiction.
Star Wars rules! You have a strong grasp of the Star Wars pulp-noir aesthetic. Sapphire is an intriguing addition to the underworld. But. Uh. The groper on the bus beat ...
Apr 14 -
Re: Mission Critical: Race Against Time - Chapter 1
Oh yeaaaah. This rocks. It really excels in its show, don't tell! approach to medical business and the military atmosphere. So. Your technical descriptions are sharp, but the narrative arc ...
Apr 14 -
Re: Leaving Maven Hills
Apologies for my lack of awareness of the lore here. I would imagine there's more to this story? Okay, so. What I'm picking up is that the protagonist's biggest tragedy ...
Apr 13 -
Re: "welded" poem/chapter 1
Fun fall-from-grace narrative. Sweeeet. The nomenclature, although, left me with a few questions. You have Technotropolis on the planet Eyrne, which sounds like some old fantasy setting. Then you name
Apr 13 -
Re: As The World Goes Dark
Okay, so. This rocks. Feels very "New Weird" genre//speculative in a cool way I've never seen done. At least, done well. We spend paragraphs on a Miss Kentucky parade and ...
Apr 13 -
Re: Meat Under Spatula
Listen, I’ve read some gritty fiction in my time. One hand, the world of Louieville is undeniably bleak, but your execution of this surrealist noir is genuinely impressive. You’ve managed ...
Apr 13
