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Re: Swan Song (7)
Few things! :3 The family next to us? is being very loud right now and I can’t sleep. Because Lin is now married, she cannot go back to the unmarried ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: [Removed]
At first I thought you were referring to the grassy hills and blue skies that had the sweltering sticky dark skin...xD But I'm tired. So I don't think you should ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (6)
Hiya! I loved this chapter. I'm curious as to how far Hoas will go, but would still rather enjoy shoving his head in a blender on max pulse. I hope ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (4)
I love the plot, though initially my head kept thinking of the movie Black Swan. Word. Okay, this is not helping at all Lava said I pictures Diamea as a ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (2)
I had two small problems with this, but it was otherwise quite enjoyable! Eurodities isn’t a very good cook and she forgets about meals since she doesn’t need to eat, ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (1)
Part four makes oodles of sense now, at least more than it did before. xD Anyway, this was a nice read! The simplicity is actually quite refreshing, and EmmaJane is ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: (untitled & incomplete)
Hey there! First off, welcome to the site! Second, I am a sucker for imagery, and you have a bit of a knack for it, though it would be much ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: The Door to Heaven
Hiya! I was surprised at how much I liked this. Like Snoink, I didn't actually read the title before clicking, half because I just linked myself elsewhere so I'd remember ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: What is Love?
Hiya! You asked me to write review this for you. I think this could be so much more original. I've heard pretty much every line in this song in multiple ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: First Love
First off ehte, sorry this took so long to review. I was waiting for review day. Anywho, I'm sad to say this seems like it was written briefly on the ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: And I'm Proud
The subject matter is win. I'm bisexual and proud, too. However, the flow is choppy and inconsistant, and I have to say I'm not the biggest fan of rhyme. At ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Extraordinary Scar- Obnoxious Kitchen Knife
I think Tanya and Smylin have good points, but I'm going to discuss the subject matter with you. I know we've already discussed this in chat, I just want to ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: Shh.
Hi there! I'll be reviewing your piece. To start off, I love the idea and your style of writing. However, if I were you, I would remove the first quote ...
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: Mistake (Part Two)
Squishy m'dear, as revenge for telling me to review (I'm not a no-sayer! xP), I shall be as mean as possible! Okay just kinda nitpicky. Just...yeah. xDD I have three ...
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: From the Ashes
I really loved this too. And seriously - I don't like very many short stories on here. (I once read one about a fourth of the length yours is, in ...
Mar 6, 2011
