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Razcoon

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Swan Song (7)

    Few things! :3 The family next to us? is being very loud right now and I can’t sleep. Because Lin is now married, she cannot go back to the unmarried ...

    Apr 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: [Removed]

    At first I thought you were referring to the grassy hills and blue skies that had the sweltering sticky dark skin...xD But I'm tired. So I don't think you should ...

    Apr 13, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Swan Song (6)

    Hiya! I loved this chapter. I'm curious as to how far Hoas will go, but would still rather enjoy shoving his head in a blender on max pulse. I hope ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Swan Song (4)

    I love the plot, though initially my head kept thinking of the movie Black Swan. Word. Okay, this is not helping at all Lava said I pictures Diamea as a ...

    Mar 30, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Swan Song (2)

    I had two small problems with this, but it was otherwise quite enjoyable! Eurodities isn’t a very good cook and she forgets about meals since she doesn’t need to eat, ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Swan Song (1)

    Part four makes oodles of sense now, at least more than it did before. xD Anyway, this was a nice read! The simplicity is actually quite refreshing, and EmmaJane is ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: (untitled & incomplete)

    Hey there! First off, welcome to the site! Second, I am a sucker for imagery, and you have a bit of a knack for it, though it would be much ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Door to Heaven

    Hiya! I was surprised at how much I liked this. Like Snoink, I didn't actually read the title before clicking, half because I just linked myself elsewhere so I'd remember ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: What is Love?

    Hiya! You asked me to write review this for you. I think this could be so much more original. I've heard pretty much every line in this song in multiple ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: First Love

    First off ehte, sorry this took so long to review. I was waiting for review day. Anywho, I'm sad to say this seems like it was written briefly on the ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: And I'm Proud

    The subject matter is win. I'm bisexual and proud, too. However, the flow is choppy and inconsistant, and I have to say I'm not the biggest fan of rhyme. At ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Extraordinary Scar- Obnoxious Kitchen Knife

    I think Tanya and Smylin have good points, but I'm going to discuss the subject matter with you. I know we've already discussed this in chat, I just want to ...

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Shh.

    Hi there! I'll be reviewing your piece. To start off, I love the idea and your style of writing. However, if I were you, I would remove the first quote ...

    Mar 20, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mistake (Part Two)

    Squishy m'dear, as revenge for telling me to review (I'm not a no-sayer! xP), I shall be as mean as possible! Okay just kinda nitpicky. Just...yeah. xDD I have three ...

    Mar 16, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: From the Ashes

    I really loved this too. And seriously - I don't like very many short stories on here. (I once read one about a fourth of the length yours is, in ...

    Mar 6, 2011


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