RayneChild

Okay, I hope I made all the necessary changes, or, at least, I think I got them all. Please let me know if there's anything else I can fix for ...

Wow. Heh. Those are a bit hard to swallow :? However, I'm willing to make the neccessary changes, STARTING with Larara's personality. Which, I'm not too happy about changing, because ...

Okay. Lol. I know it's short, but this is all the dream was. There was nothing else to it, so I don't how I know what had happened throughout the ...

Thanks for the crits and comments! They really help! And, Noemi?(VampireBloodrace): The striking pain in my head told me that this was no dream – I was wide awake. Lol, ...

Thanks so much for your reviews! I changed those for you to the best of my ability. If you have anything else, please let me know! I hope you enjoyed ...

Um, sure :) I need to think of the storyline, but sure. I'll get started on that asap! Thanks so much for the suggestion!

Okay! I fixed the fire - eye thing. I hope it works now :) And Trikky, about the 'smiling' thing: this cat does ;) Lol. I couldn't think of another ...

Thanks for the critiques! They're always so helpful. I'll fix those straight away! I'm so glad you liked it n_n I see where you're coming from, so I think I'll ...

I AM ABSOLUTELY NOT HAPPY WITH THAT LAST NAME!!!!!!!!!!!! EITHER USE CANEERO LIKE MY HELLITE STORY OR CHANGE IT TO SOMTHING BETTER!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!! Um...Caneero is Larara's last name, so...obviously

Oh... haha. Thank you for pointing those out to me!!! I'll fix them right away! It's so weird how the reader notices these things that the writer doesn't... Anyway, thanks ...

Okay! I fixed everything! I hope it's better now! Luranno and Daikon aren't as nice anymore! Yay!!! Lol. I hope you enjoy it more, now that I fixed the mistakes. ...

VampireBloodrace: Wow...That's a lot of errors. I'll fix those asap! Sela Locke: Lol. Okay, I will admit that it is a little...soft (for lack of a better word) for a ...

Lol. Yes, I meant murderer. I can't believe I never noticed that before!!! Also, about the classroom thing; the picture I had in my mind was that everyone was talking ...

Yeah, I know what you mean. I'll fix those... *hurries off to fix story* Thanks! ~Rayne

Thank you all for your advice! It's amazing to see how many mistakes I actually made... But I fixed them all! ^^ OMG Carzyl, you were soo right! I used ...