Ravenous

Thank Fate I read this! I never really liked pencils before, but now I suppose I'll be using one all the time. I wonder, if you use a pen long ...

This story has a lot of potential. Normally, cat-like or feline characters are difficult to write, because they need to be so elegant and such, but you did a good ...

"They ran like comets, and they tread on stars." Hey! I love that! It's so dreamy and nice. Hehe, I really like that. Nice way to end a chapter. Hansel ...

I like this story a lot. It's very similar - VERY similar - to one of my own. You had a few grammatical errors, but, as you said, that's not ...

In the fifth to last paragraph, it should be "descent" not "decent". It sounds like Clio's nicely dressed, which he probably is, hehe. This is a nice story, but I ...

Like that other person said, where's the pain coming from? Besides that, your description of the pain was beautiful . . . yes, I said it. There were a few ...