-
Re: Jessie's Journey - Chapter 1
I just want to say, this premise is really interesting. All of the students get their own genesis. I feel like there's a lot of potential for your story which ...
Mar 31, 2018 -
Re: Provenance: Chapter 1.2
Man, I'll never get tired of your writing. As always, good work. I really enjoyed the story. I take back what I said about the previous chapter, you are flowing ...
Mar 31, 2018 -
Re: Provenance: A Prologue
Hello again! Once again beautiful writing. You don't understand how amazed I am. This feels like the first chapter/beginning of a full story. That's not a bad thing. That means ...
Mar 31, 2018 -
Re: Provenance: Chapter 1
Hi Nobunaga! I just have to say, your writing is amazing. Trust me, it's not an exaggeration. There's definitely a clear sense of direction for your story. The way you ...
Mar 31, 2018
