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RavenNaal

  • Poetry » Realistic, Review Re: DON'T mourn my death!

    This poem has a really fun and well thought out theme. The way you executed what you were trying to convey was great and each line read super well! Death ...

    Feb 4, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: you were easy to listen to and hard to hear

    This was super creative! I loved it! I have never seen a poem written in this format, but its makes sense and is super effective. At first it is a ...

    Feb 4, 2023
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The Art of Deception.

    This story was very unique! Starting off with a mystery, leading into a possibility, then right into a big reveal is all super fun to read. It was a very ...

    Feb 4, 2023
  • Poetry » Chickens, Chickens Re: you are surely not a goose or you would know exactly what i'm saying

    For a serious review now, I felt that this was more of a philosophical poem than anything else. Things like, "Every goose is going somewhere, Sometimes there is no question, ...

    Feb 4, 2023
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The silent struggle

    This poem is beautifully written! You did a great job in conveying the title of the piece towards the writing. Its clear what your story is and your word choice ...

    Feb 4, 2023


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— Mark Twain