RavenBlack

It's fine :-D Its nice to see someone else improve on their talent :-)

Hey I'm back! Here's my thoughts on the nightmare section. As usual I'll review as i go along :-D - The first two lines are great in setting the tone ...

Thanks for the help, really appreciate it :-D so just to be clear added action that's different to the previous one should be separate when in dialogue?

Oh, sorry for correcting you then :-(

Okay, thank you for the help :-D Much appreciated!

I know, the struggle is real xD

Thanks for the review. They're really helpful :-D Was this one written better as its in 3rd person without a pov now??

Thanks for the review, they really help me improve. And this is a late reply but hopefully work goes well for you :-D

Thanks :-D I did part 2 of this part. Could you check it out for me. Much appreciated :-)

Oh okay, I'll make sure to change that. Thanks for the help :-D

Thanks for the review. It's nice to get feedback from someone who's read so of my work :-D I decided to not do character POVs anymore. This chapter was meant ...

Thanks for pointing out the dialogue tags, better soon than later :-D Your review really helped :-)

No problem :-D

Raven Black back for the third review! As usual I'll review as I go along :-D - ' That kind of thing only happened in movies….Right? Of course it only ...

Yeah sure. Glad to help :-D