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Re: Passing Notes
This is an excerpt from another piece that I'm working on. I will work on the army section. I definitely want to include it, so I'll lengthen that part of ...
May 25, 2012 -
Re: The 3 levels of the Gifted~ Prologue
I really like this piece! One suggestion I have for you is to ease into the beginning a little bit more, so that the reader understands that it's part of ...
May 14, 2012 -
Re: Passing Notes
How come? Any suggestions?
May 12, 2012 -
Re: Indecision.
Hello again. :) I really like this poem! The conflicting emotions are portrayed extremely well. Great job!
Apr 19, 2012 -
Re: He Could Not Escape
I really like this poem because of the story it tells. I only have a few suggestions. In the line
Mar 7, 2012 -
Re: This Must Never Have Been Love
Thanks for all the positive reviews!!!
Feb 29, 2012 -
Re: Oh say, can you see it?
Thank you 343GuiltySpark! You're right, that is what Francis wrote in Matt's notebook. :) I'm glad that you learned something from my assignment.
Feb 29, 2012 -
Re: This Must Never Have Been Love
Hi Picklesole! Thank you. :) I was a bit concerned about the length, so I'm glad you don't think it is too long.
Feb 29, 2012 -
Re: No Man's Girl
I loved your story! I agree with the other's about wanting a bit more background on Lillie, but other than that it was a really good read. The only thing ...
Feb 24, 2012