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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: nightmares for life

    The way how you make humans out to be monsters so boldly is well bold. I like it how you compare stress and with something sharp and merciless and the ...

    Jun 13, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Claustrophobic Chapter 1

    the begining of this was breathtaking. I was starting to feel fear from it and I love small spaces( there nice and cozy). I also like how you make sure ...

    Jun 13, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Sure As Nature

    You have such a pure veiw of nature and it makes all the more unique. The way that you say how noble and small the ant is shows how the ...

    Jun 13, 2012
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: In a Moment

    first of all i love the short! it was well written in my eyes. I just thought that maybe you should include just a tiny bit of information of why ...

    Jun 13, 2012


Tell me, what is it you plan to do / with your one wild and precious life?
— Mary Oliver