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Re: Eguain, Deviled egg
Wow, I didn't know this would get much response. :lol: Well I didn't really think long on a name, I guess it IS a pretty nasty name! :lol:
May 25, 2007 -
Re: Prelude to: Harestin, The Tale Of
Thanks Grif, I thought about it for a while, I think you are right. I guess I just imagined big ships with banks of oars... isn't that what tiremes are? ...
May 24, 2007 -
Re: Prelude to: Harestin, The Tale Of
Thanks for the comments! Very encouraging, I wasn't sure that I improved at all. I'll be sure to correct that mistake too. Next section coming soon!
May 23, 2007 -
Re: Prelude to: Harestin, The Tale Of
Haha, I didn't think of that. Well I'll have to change that. *sighs audibly and once again goes to edit*
May 19, 2007 -
Re: Prelude to: Harestin, The Tale Of
Thanks for the crits! (I'll take more :D ) Okay, first of all, I named my character because I liked the idea. It's pronounced Hare-es-stin, not Hare-stin, if that's what ...
May 17, 2007 -
Re: Galactic Ranger GR-8D (FanFic of Ratchet, UYA)
Thanks for the crit! I am feeling kind of sheepish. :oops: I forgot to read my own story through. Yes, it is choppy I agree, some of it I wrote ...
May 12, 2007