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  • Poetry » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: Under Scarlet Waves

    Analysis The poem begins with the narrator already underwater and confused. Lines like How did I get here? and Was it me, or was it he? make it clear that ...

    Nov 21, 2025
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Dear April (First Draft)

    Analysis Dear April is a letter from a father to his biological daughter who was adopted. It moves through his past mistakes and his interactions with April, blending confession, memory, ...

    Oct 21, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Judged

    Analysis The poem Judged is about how no matter what you do, people will always find something wrong with it. Every line starts with a question— Should I lose weight? ...

    Oct 20, 2025
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: in this house

    In This House Opening lines /this house, as it always has been and will be, is a contaminated space./ Starting with “this house” grounds the poem in a very direct ...

    Oct 3, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Horror Re: Stained Rose: Chapter 1 - Part 1

    Stained Rose ~ A full analysis and breakdown Overall Thoughts: This piece is atmospheric, thoughtful, and emotionally grounded. The strength lies in how it balances grief with quiet, everyday details,

    Oct 3, 2025
  • Short Story » General, General Re: chapter one: its a music minefield

    I saw a review using this format from @Ravena and I really liked it and wanted to use it but I wasn't sure if I could. If you see this ...

    Sep 19, 2025
  • Script » Dramatic, Humor Re: The Witches and The Boy

    Hi Roxanne, I absolutely loved this script. For such a short piece, it grabbed my attention right away and kept me engaged through every line. The humor landed perfectly, and ...

    Sep 18, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Our trip to the beach in 2024

    Hi Genevieve, It was a pleasure to read your poem! I really liked this poem — it felt both nostalgic and deeply personal. The way it starts with lighthearted images ...

    Sep 18, 2025
  • Short Story » Horror, Teen Fiction Re: Darryl Crawford-The trouble of Carlos

    This story was wild from beginning to end — in a good way. It starts with such a nostalgic tone, Darryl sneaking out for Trick-or-Treating in 2003 even though his ...

    Sep 13, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: WITHOUT A HAND TO HOLD

    Dear Ippoet, I want to take a moment to reflect on the complexity of our society—how deeply polarized, fragmented, and detached we’ve become. So much so that even events marked ...

    Sep 11, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: The World is Grey

    I really connected with this poem because it felt very grounded and real. The way the speaker talked about the world turning grey made me think of times when life ...

    Sep 10, 2025
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: The Love my Parents Have.

    This piece really resonated with me. The way you described your dad knowing your mom’s laugh and cherishing her quirks was so sweet, and it made me think of my ...

    Sep 10, 2025
  • Poetry » Literature, Other Re: What is Love?

    This poem was such a joy to read — it radiates warmth and positivity all the way through. I loved how you opened with the line “wisdom withers if it ...

    Sep 10, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Fantasy Re: Don't Fear the Reaper

    This piece really caught my attention — it has such a haunting yet oddly comforting tone. I liked how you addressed death directly as both “sweet man” and “kind man,” ...

    Sep 10, 2025
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Romantic Re: fire beneath ice

    I really enjoyed reading this piece! The way you write Persephone and Hades makes their connection feel both beautiful and heavy at the same time. I could feel the emotions ...

    Sep 10, 2025


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