Rascalover

Hello and welcome to YWS! As always I encourage you to review others work as well as post your own, and it looks like your on a good start :) ...

Hello, Here as requested :) First I will give you an in-depth review of grammar mistakes then my overall thought of the story. I opened my eyes but it wasn’t ...

Hey, Thanks for requesting a review :) I will be nit-picky about grammar and such, but don't take it personal; I just want you to have an awesome story. Now ...

Hello and thanks for requesting a review, I will be a little nit-picky towards grammar aspects, but it's all so you can be a better write. On to the meat ...

Being the daughter of a retired soldier, this hits home. I think it's a beautiful piece. There were a few places where the flow felt interrupted, but other than that ...

Hello, Here as requested, and thanks for doing so :) I maybe a little nit-picky towards grammar, but that's just because, as a fellow writer, I want you to be ...

Hello, During this review I may become a little nit-picky about grammar, but don't take it personally, I just want you to have the best review :) Now on to ...

Hello and Welcome :) I see you haven't reviewed anything quite yet, and I just whated to encourage you to do so. I'm happy to be one of the first ...

Hello there, Thank you for requesting a review :) The main thing about my reviews is that I tend to be a nit-picky grammar nazi, but I combed through your ...

Hello and Welcome, I am so sorry that it took me so long to get to this review, but I will admit I was intimidated by the length of this ...

Hey, Thank you for requesting a review, but I do have to ask why are you posting all of these poems under one thread? I haven't read the others yet, ...

Hey, I am happy to be amongst your first reviewers :) This was short and bittersweet. It reminds me of the moive 365 days of summer, have you seen it? ...

Hey, Thank you for requesting a review. I have noticed though that the pacing your events are way too fast, add some description to them to slow them down, and ...

Hey, Thank you requesting a review :). I rather enjoyed the first chapter, so I'm eager to start reading this one. Liesabet's heart skipped wildly in her chest as the ...

Hey, Thanks for requesting a review. This story is set in Celle, Germany during the years 1943-1945. An 18 year old cellist born to a German father and a half-Jewish ...