Rascalover

Hey, Thansk for requesting a review! :D He who receives baptism by rain at 3a.m. I love your style of writing. Great first line. not renewed from yesterday’s ritual piss ...

Hello, I know you requested a review from a quite a bit ago, but I just didn't know what to say. I did a review to fix all the grammar ...

Hello, Welcome to YWS; I encourage you to go and start reviewin others work :D Let me start by reviewing yours: I know were only supposed to be friends but ...

Hey, Thanks, for requesting a review, and allowing me a little time to get to it. my review will be based on grammatical errors and such. Hope it helps with ...

Hey, Thank you for asking for a review; at least that's what I thought you did. Sorry I am kind of late, but I am here now. This is such ...

Hey, Thanks for requesting a review, and I am so sorry that I am super late. I'm now adjusted to college life, so hopefully i'll be on more. You had ...

Hey, Thanks for requesting a review. Now that I have had some time to think about it, here are two things I want to ask/ point out: 1) She is ...

Hey, Thank you for requesting a review. Once again, I do not like fantasy works, but I will review because you asked so nicely, and I did like the first ...

Hey, Thank you for requesting a review; here I am. Most of my review will be grammatical errors, but I will try to comment on the plot and characters as ...

Hey, Here I am to review chapter three; i couldn't sleep without doing it, ahaha! You are such a talented writer. Here we go again :) Smack. Smack. Pop. The ...

Hey, Here I am for chapter two and possbile chapter three if I have the time. Chapter one was so amazing. The review format will be the same. Green left ...

Hello, Thank you for requesting a review. most of my review will consist of grammar mistakes, but I will try to give you an opinion of the plot and characters ...

Hello, Thank you for asking for a review! I'm a bit late, but better than never. I absolutely love this poem and it's originality! Always capitalize the first letter in ...

Hello, Here to review :) All in all this is a pretty strong piece; the flow is a little rocky, but other than that I really liked this poem. I ...

Hello, Here to review; let's start with grammatical errors if there are any. *Writing style* I don't like the repitition of its in this first paragraph. Since the baby is ...