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  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Unlucky 13 - Epilogue

    Oh awesome! I love that parallel.

    Jan 29, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 21

    Lol maybe it is - I could just be really nitpicking lol xD

    Jan 29, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 20

    (Yikes, I am so sorry for all those weird symbols, it happens with apostrophes and things when I message from my phone).

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 20

    Honestly, info-dumping could be the way to go- as long as it%u2019s not a toooon of info that will be hard for the reader to digest. For example, Julia could ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 19.1

    Oh got it! Yep, just read the second part haha and it%u2019s her birthday party. Thanks for the reminder!

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Humor Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 18

    OHHH xP Well my guesses about Ella were pretty mild haha - like she doesn't feel like she belongs, she wants to be popular, but now that you've said that ...

    Jan 14, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Something i want to tell you, but i never will... unless we get married. lol

    I really liked this. The vibes from the title were what drew me in (I love??? that title? It's weird but it's good and great) and I love the simple ...

    Jan 13, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: A Scandal in Gotham #2

    Ah, I see! Well, I definitely saw that part of his character come through, so thumbs up from me:)

    Jan 5, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: The Rose Thorn Princess

    Thank you so much!! I%u2019m glad you enjoyed the world. I also totally see how it seems a bit rushed (makes sense - I was trying to not make it ...

    Dec 27, 2019
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: The Rose Thorn Princess

    Ahhh thank you so much for this review! I definitely agree about the Rune bit - I wish I%u2019d included more for his character. thank you again, I really appreciate ...

    Dec 15, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Peace and Peaches - Chapter 2

    Thank you for this review! I%u2019ve actually discontinued this, sadly, but I%u2019m working on a new novel. I may revisit this sometime in the future but for now it%u2019s kind ...

    Oct 4, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 13

    Ohhh, okay, yeah aging her up would be fine too! Also I%u2019ve never watched Paw Patrol, just thought it was a young kids show. But no shame :p Okay, timeline ...

    Jul 22, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 12

    I think it%u2019s a bit unrealistic - I can definitely help out in a WFP :) Ping me when you%u2019ve created one and I%u2019ll join asap

    Jul 18, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 10

    Hehe excited for it! You%u2019re welcome!:)

    Jul 17, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Unlucky 13 - Chapter 9

    Ahh I see! And woohoo!:) I need to go and read Chapter 10 haha

    Jul 12, 2019


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