Raindeer

Hello Lib! Am I.... finally caught up? Whaaaaat. Crazy. Anyway, let’s jump right in. Zoya is easily becoming my favorite character. Her knowledge and wit is really pulling me in! ...

Heya! Happy Team Tortoise. A couple specific thoughts before I jump into general ones: Day - who looked to be in their late teens - smiled. “What’s up?” It seems ...

Hi there Lethargic! Happy Team Tortoise. I haven’t read or reviewed previous chapters, but hopefully my thoughts are helpful nonetheless! I really liked the dialogue in the story. I think ...

Hey, whatcha! I think this might be my favorite chapter so far. It has a mix of Frieda-thoughts (her mulling over her job hunt) and action (her visiting the “fortune ...

Hey hey~! WOWIE. Good chapter. I love how, when Audrey suddenly remembers the conversation she had with Obraya in the past, it's stirring up fear. It also gets the reader ...

Heyo, Lib! Happy Review Day! YAYYY! I am so glad Obraya is back. Of course, I'm not sure how I feel about her (morally) yet, but I love her as ...

What's up whatcha! It seems Frieda is aware - or at least semi-aware - of her feelings for Petra. For example; The feeling of her warm, rough skin against mine ...

Hi Green! W-WHAT?! HER FAMILY is DEAD? Dang, finding that out was really sad. The blatant list of all their names was like punches in the gut. Super hard-hitting. I'm ...

Hi Green! Happy Review Day. First off - typing this on my phone, sorry if there’s any silly typos. It’s been a while since I’ve reviewed this! I’m sorry. Let’s ...

Hi AngelLily! Happy Review Day. I know I haven't read/reviewed the other chapters in this project yet, but this has been in the Green Room for a long time so ...

HII King Akolxohez had strong feelings for Audrey Emmerson. OMG “If you fall in love, Audrey’s soulmate will die. And the Ditch won’t be able to be saved. This was ...

Hi Lib! Happy Review Day!! Okay, so I love Zoya. And Ujalaa. They're both super awesome. I also like how Will's jealousy finally causes him to confront Akol - who ...

Hi whatcha! Whew, that was a tough chapter for Frieda. Being laid off and having to trudge home in the rain PLUS her wallet gets stolen by a child thief?! ...

Hi! Here as requested. I want to start by saying that this is totally the type of book I would pick up in a bookstore. I'm loving this overall vibe. ...

Hey Lib! Here for another review day review. On my phone - sorry in advance for any typos! So, last chapter I talked about description - BUT I really enjoyed ...