Raindeer

Hi there! I hope I'm submitting this review in time and before this is due! Since this is a school work, I'm going to focus a bit more on grammar/syntax ...

Hey zaminami! Hopefully this review is helpful to you as you make any small edits for your contest. Or you can totally disregard my feedback haha. :P Cecilia stared at ...

Hey Firerose! I'm here to review your work. Welcome to the site, by the way! I hope you're liking it here. I'm going to kind of break this up with ...

Omg hey! Normally I don’t review poetry but the title of this really caught my eye and I felt like I wanted to review (which is rare these days lol). ...

Hey there! Okay, I'm not quite sure how to review this just because it seems like it was more of a story for fun. Even so, it's posted so I'm ...

Hey Weirdo!! I've noticed a few of these chapters in the green room every once in a while since LMS started, but I never got around to them. Anyway, I ...

Ey hello! I'm really excited to read this (I remember that first draft sort of chapter you wrote a little while ago and I had really enjoyed it). Anyway, from ...

Hey there! I’m coming by for a quick little review on this fine review day. All righty, I just want to start off by saying that I’m doing this review ...

Hello there! I've read the both the prologue and the first chapter, but they both had several reviews already on them so I decided to just hop on over to ...

Hey marms! I know this review is extremely late but it's the last chapter and I can't just not review it! Specifics about previous chapter (that I didn't review): I ...

Hey marms. Another apology for being so lazy and behind on this. The suspense has been killing meee. I really want to know what's going to happen to Griffin, haha ...

Yo yo yo. Ooooh. I'm really curious what this thing going on with Margo is. I'm guessing it may be something to do with the book and it "contaminating" (best ...

Hey! Wooo! So much went down in this chapter! It's getting suuuper exciting. I'm a bit concerned how blindly Margo is following Juno. Margo doesn't even ask what the spell ...

Hey! I'm trying to catch up haha. So, let's get to it. The saddest thing about revisiting places you’ve been before is that you’re not really seeing it again. Everything ...

hello marms! let's hop right to it! But it was the truth, more than the guilt, that made her sick. Everything seemed like a lie and that hurt more than ...