RainWanderer

Finally finish reading your story! I was studing for exam, sorry..=.= now here is the review: It rang out in the dark nothingness that surrounded nothing but a small man ...

I like this story! I want to fly with my own wings one day too! That will cure my acrophobia(afraid of height)! =D Anyway, here is the review: She had ...

OK, cookies, I know that you want to show all your work at once for people to read, but 9,256 words for one post is just a little...massive for anyone ...

Loveless, you have such a good way of writing to convey the pain of the character to the reader. I felt sorry for your little Rayne...But then, he might not ...

Nice, really nice piece you have there. Emotional and strong, your story triggered something in me and drawn me to it dark world. I would like to see more from ...

Quite interesting, but there are a few parts that draw my attention away from the story: The child had just spoken yet another word somewhere between human speech and noise. ...

This is a quite interesting story you have here. The way you wrote about Logan is good. I can clearly see his violent, beastly nature. And about the main character, ...