RainGrae

Thank you- for me, I feel like suicide attempts do come from dark thoughts but they happen because people have given up, even on thinking. It's just a feeling of ...

Hey! Thanks, it's called "The Ice is Getting Thinner" by Death Cab By Cutie. It's a really slow song. This didn't actually happen, but I can't deny that it hasn't ...

Hello (: Thank you! It's nice to hear a good review. This was the first short story I've written while I was actually feeling down and the first one I've ...

Thank you! I am hoping to find an inspiration to do a spin off :) I want it to have the same atmosphere as this one while having a more ...

Hiya! That really means a lot to me. Thank you! I wanted this character to feel real and relatable. At first, I was thinking of continuing this and creating a ...

Hi (: Thank you! I was actually listening to the song while I was on the subway and this scene just automatically played in my head. I actually started writing ...

Thank you so much

I love your poem. Short and sweet, it portrayed your message really well.

Thanks, I will surely ask for some advice sometime. The flow of my poems do need work because there are just so many ideas I don't know when to limit ...

Thanks for the advice. I was trying to describe life using metaphors related to writing. I'm working on it :)

Thank you ^_^ I was really trying to describe life by using metaphors relating to writing. I'm working on the flow. Thanks for the critique.

I take criticism as a tool to help me improve in my other poems as well. Thank you for that very helpful review!

Thank You! :) I'm trying to just let the words flow out of me. I'm trying to improve on writing a more vivid image.

Thank You! I'll for sure try to figure out how to alter the second stanza :)

Thank you for the honest review :) it is helpful. I will take your advice in writing without rhyme, or at least, writing with vivid words to send my message ...