Raichu13

Thanks for your feedback! Yes you are technically right about the eye part but I kept it simple for the coherence of the ending lines

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Thank you for the feedback! Will surely take care of the points.

Thank you for the feedback! Will surely work upon them

Thank you for your feedback! Will surely take the points into consideration.

Thank you for the review. You very well elaborated every part of my story taking it from the new ideas to the areas for improvement. This really broadened my view ...