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Please excuse me while I squee. SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. This was wonderful. Fantastic characters, right amount of detail. Squee, squee, squee.

Ahhhhh yes. That is me.

Snoinkus is full of wisdom! Thank you darling %u2661%u2661%u2661

Thank you lovey Lava dearest. Made several of the suggested changes already!

Wait wait wait, did you add a whole 'nother chunk to this just now?

Hi there! No worries at all. Just go to my profile, click on my reviews, find this review, copy and paste, and viola!

So you're gonna get two reviews here, Darlin'. First I'm going to respond to your response, though, because I smell a problem I once really struggled with as well. Gather ...

1) I never had an issue distinguishing between the two Rovs, same name or no. They sound different. Good dialogue doesn't need excess tags. 2) I [b]did[/i] read your paragraph, ...

Um, that was not supposed to be in reply to your review, Heart. Sorry!

Skinsy, I adore you, and your writing never ceases to amaze me. My critiquing brain is absent for the time being, but I'll get back to you, dearest. I will. ...

Skinsy, I adore you, and your writing never ceases to amaze me. My critiquing brain is absent for the time being, but I'll get back to you, dearest. I will. ...

This was edited between when you got to it and Rosey got to it... thankfully for you! But... thank you so much for the response! I guess I'm still deciding ...

If you like the melodramaticness, then by all means keep it :). The main reason I advise against it is that...well, what happens when you get to a super dramatic ...

I'm baaaaaaack! (And I bet I'll beat Azila too... mwahahahahaha) Okay, so don't freak out about the upcoming text wall. Just pay attention to the bolded words...and my various ramblings...and...other ...