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Hey Codex! I haven't read the other chapters, so sorry about that. But even so, I could follow along well enough, which I usually find to be a good sign. ...

Oh, Deathcurrent, I am intrigued. So very intrigued. A tiny bit confused, but considering that i haven't read the first post, that confusion is understandable. From what I gather, just ...

I'm sort of super impressed that this is a NaNo right now. I mean, it's coherent. NaNos aren't supposed to be coherent! Most remarkable. But, hi, WrittenInStone! I'm Rach. For ...

Oh, Para. The sheer amount of imagination and creativity in this has my overjoyed. I mean, seriously. I haven't read the other sections, but there's just... such a richness to ...

Woooo! Hi, Palip. Sorry no one's gotten to this yet... I think the forums got flooded with lots of work this month. Anyway, I'm Rachael, if that wasn't clear. A ...

Hi, Ren! I'm Rachael, the frog's Ribbit, here to review, etc, etc. What a whirlwind of a chapter! You've loaded so much into such a short amount of text, I'm ...

Oh, Vi. When I saw in my feed that you'd posted something, I came straight here. I don't know quite what I think about this piece yet. I'll know by ...

Tenny Tenny Tenny. I think I already told you this on chat, but between the title, the synopsis, and this first chapter, you've made a fan out of me. This ...

Well, Calli, I'm here. Before I begin, know that a) I've reviewed one poem on YWS since I've been here b) the thought of reviewing poetry gives me the chills ...

Lumos! Hello! I don't think I've ever reviewed something of yours. Probably because, as you said, your stomping grounds are usually poetry, which I avoid, and mine is fiction, which ...

So, Sheary. Sheary sheary sheary. I don't know why I wanted to do that. But I did. Oh well. Anyway, no, it's not evening over here. I wanted to reply ...

There's a certain entertainment factor to jumping randomly into a novel. I mean, here's chapter six, I haven't read any of the others, so it's like walking into a movie ...

Hey, Serenity! Sorry for the long delay. I've been... well... I'll just leave it at busy :) Anyway, what stood out to me about this was the dialogue. Given that ...

PINK. You know, I don't know if I've ever reviewed something of yours, and I can't wrap my head around why or why not. Maybe because this is in the ...

Hey Mattimias! First: your love for storytelling and writing is obvious here. Also obvious is that you had whole gobs of fun writing this. Never lose that energy. As you ...