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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Realistic Re: Slate and Earth Chapter 1

    LAUREN. WOMAN. I want more of this, and I want more of it now . I love the repeated tease of the forest being magic. I love the PNW details, ...

    Jul 2, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Chapter 19.2

    Hey Fox! Drache here. 19.2 is an awkward place to drop in on someone's story, especially when it involves elements that were likely explained elsewhere (i.e. the semi-humanoid/shapeshifting-esque sort

    Jul 2, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Charm of Deception - Chapter 21

    Hey there, Vyper! Rache, here to review. So, I'm dropping into this chapter without reading all the others. That said, I didn't have too hard a time figuring out what ...

    Jul 1, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Dragon`s Doctor ch. 2: Brother Sam

    Oh, I like this. I like it very much indeed. In particular, I like the relationships going on here between all the characters. I like the characters themselves. And I ...

    Jul 1, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: A Merry Band of Monsters [V2] - Chapter 2

    Hey there! So, this had me snickering and giggling and chortling left and right. You had me at a character named Vegemite, in particular. And in general, I enjoyed how ...

    Jul 1, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Bridging Ch 01

    Hey Wizard, It's clear from this chapter that you have both strong storytelling instincts and strong technical writing skills. Your characters have character, your writing has voice, there's flow, the

    Jun 28, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Fox Who Stole Her Name 1.2

    Lauren, my wise blackberry-cobbler-and-lightning child-- First of all, I was alarmed and offended and all sorts of disgruntled to see this at the bottom of the Green Barrel. But now ...

    Jun 27, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Last Light Companion [Chapter 2.2]

    Lightsong, my friend! 'tis Rache, here to review! I figured out partway through reading this that English isn't your first language. To which I made a massive surprised face because ...

    Aug 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Unlucky Catkill Court (part 1.03)

    Hey there! Rach here to review. I'm dropping into the middle of your story here--I haven't read 1.01 or 1.02--and am also ordering pizza in another tab. If I accidentally ...

    Aug 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: DUET :Chapter 19:

    I LOVE YOUR CHARACTERS. I want to befriend them and chill beside them. Especially Sammy. Definitely Sammy. You know how rare it is for me to find a female character ...

    Aug 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter3 (BÖÐÚLFUR’S P.O.V)

    Hello! I'm RacheDrache, better known as Rach, here to review. I tend to be rambly, so, apologies. Firstly, I like this. I like that there are parts in Icelandic--just enough--and ...

    Aug 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Politics Re: Cat Steps Chapter 3.1

    Hello, love! I think I liked this. I really think I do. By the end of this review, I'll know if I do and you'll know if I do and ...

    Aug 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Adventures in Eridell (temporary title)

    Hello there! I'm Rache, longtime fantasy nerd and unofficial Queen of the Green Room. I haven't read the prologue, so I'm plunging into this foolhardy and uninformed (apologies). Still, I ...

    Aug 11, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Lameness of Paper Messages [Part 1]

    Well, hello, lovely! I am Rache, as you know, and obviously, I'm here to review. You also know I review by rambling at you until I've managed to say something. ...

    Aug 10, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Words Written in Lightning: Chapter 5 [Final Draft]

    Why, hello there! I'm Rache, and before I begin my review proper, there are a few things you should know. First, I am typing this on my phone. Why? I ...

    Aug 9, 2016


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