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Re: Upon Waking
Hello Faia. Love the story, it's increadibly creative. "My head began to spin, my stomach churn again and my heart try to break my ribcage." Part of that sentence doesn't ...
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: What a Wonderful World
I think a little more detail is in order. I would like to know where abouts he is, what he's in the middle of a fight that night. When you ...
Jul 3, 2009 -
Re: Exile - Chapter 1 - Part 1
Luxury window? In my not-at-all-profesional opinion, I think this this is worded a little strangely. I agree with Paul_iii in the first comment that you use a rather lot of ...
Jul 3, 2009
