Quinine

Thank you! I will definitely look into meter more ^-^

You're welcome :)

I'll keep that in mind for next time :)

Thanks for your review! Your points were noted. However, when I wrote it, (which was a while ago) it wasn't intended to portray fear and destruction. It was more of ...

Ah okay, I'll keep that in mind! ^-^

That's a good idea actually XD

There's a long story behind the term 'gibbler' which I might explain later. Yes, it was only so it would rhyme, since the rest of poem also rhymed. I sometimes ...

Your notes the iambic quadrameter was very helpful, thanks! As for the parts about the crying sky, I feel an explanation would seem out of place. Thanks! :D

Thanks!

Nice! A Couple Tips: 1. Try to make the texts visually look more like texts. Example: Lauren i'll be home late tonight. i have tv taping, then Kimmel. Asher I'll ...