QuietRoman

Thank you! I like experimenting with different poetic devices, so I'm happy you like it! :)

Thank you very much for the thorough review! I don't mind long reviews at all, in fact, I feel very honored to receive them! :) The "she" character can represent ...

Thank you for the kind review! :) I think you're right in that the word 'pesticides' seems a little off when you read it--I'll see what I can do about ...

You're free to interpret the "she" character however you'd like. My personal idea, however, was that "she" is the voice of self-doubt and self-criticism that all writers have, personified. Thank ...

Thank you very much! To address your concerns: 1) You are free to interpret that however you'd like. :) My personal idea for it was that 'she' is the self-criticizing, ...

Thank you very much! I'll try to go back and add stanzas now. :)

Thank you very much for the detailed review! Your criticisms have helped me to examine this poem and try to improve it. I'll definitely try to season my writing with ...

Thank you for the review! I actually had the poem separated into stanzas in the original document, but I wasn't sure how to format it into stanzas after submitting it. ...

Thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate it!