Quetseli

This was a moving piece of work. It's brings out the facts of what really happens in this world and reading this brought out emotions in me. The anger he ...

Its a beautiful poem! Your descriptions are done very well and I could see the mountains , the lake, everything you described. The only thing that confused me was that ...

It's a lovely story. Sad too, because of the death of Peter and that an old woman is crying(I hate when old people cry because I begin to cry too ...

This is pretty good! The only thing I would watch in your use of past and present terms. A few times I caught the use of the opposite term, but ...

This is so wonderfully well done. I love it! I love how you continuously relate things to other stuff(Jeez, I forgot the word for that!). It makes the piece more ...

It's a good story! The only thing I would say to fix is deeper thoughts of the characters and a better description of what's going on in the world around ...

I don't beileve I heard of a villanelle, if that relates at all to how the poem is written. It's a confusing poem, the idea of it unclear, but I ...

It has a strange story to it. I can't quite grasp it, but it seems as if she was murdered. A young girl who was nice and beautiful to everyone ...

It's lovely work! I think its done wonderfully. The thing you could do though is describe the characters, their surrounds, and actions. Like when scolding a child, what is the ...

This is a good start to something interesting! I like it. :3 I think you can discribe the characters and the church a bit more, it helps with the mental ...

Aw, that's a good man for you. Trying to learning something, getting humiltated in the process, just to sing a love song. That's sweet.