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Re: Chapter 4 of Princess of the Sea
Hello! I'm afraid I haven't read the first few chapters of this story yet, but we'll see if I can help you with this one! I really love your characters, ...
Dec 30, 2017 -
Re: Stop it and I’ll sue ya!
Hey! This was a really amusing read! The whole thing flowed nicely and the voice of the boxer gave some good comedic punctuation to each stanza! I'm not much good ...
Dec 30, 2017 -
Re: The Mage's Choice
Hello! Happy review day! This is a wonderful start to a book! You have a very interesting concept here. I'm really interested to know about how the magic system works ...
Dec 30, 2017 -
Re: Umbrella Spells:Chapter One
Hello! This is an excellent first chapter! You already have me interested in your characters, especially Lydia, and both of their respective plot lines. I thoroughly enjoyed your humorous style ...
Dec 30, 2017 -
Re: Suspect 009, Chapter 1
Hello! I have to say you've done a really wonderful job with this story! Your characters are already interesting and the plot is fast-paced and exciting! I had a quick ...
Dec 28, 2017 -
Re: Spinning Around Chapter One
Hello! I'll just leave you a little review! This seems like a really interesting concept! You're character interactions are really well done and I'd really like to see how the ...
Dec 28, 2017
