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Thanks! I'll definitely consider everything you put in this

Your review actually made me smile. I'm glad/sad that you can relate to this because it's a sensitive subject but you also made me feel better. I really appreciate the ...

Also, if I wanted to put ratings it would be 12 not 18 , pretty sure you dont have to be 18 to handle swear words, they're just words.

I'm aware that the pink and red are describing sacks of helium thats what I intended..???

Twixt? What? Is that a word? Sorry I don't see the problem about those lines and this isn't about a specific relationship - happy or sad. It's about my own ...

I just want to point out that this was written more than a month before I even joined this site, and weeks before I reviewed your poem earlier today. My ...

Then maybe you should use something of your original ideas and not someone else's quote. Just a suggestion

Hey there! Just for fun, I'm making my review a haiku "Syllables are wrong This doesn't make any sense Good luck and good try" The thing is, this doesn't count ...

Thanks!

She is special thats the superiority. And she seems strong but is really fragile on the inside and has been through a lot.

Oh! Well that's a lot better haha! :P

It's refreshing that you want to hear my intent since I've actually been told before that it was irrelevant :P It is about someone I was in love with and ...

Thanks for the review! That wasn't my favorite part, but I was trying to work with the heat vs ice metaphor I had in that stanza. Like I would open ...

Oh that just seemed a little out of place with a weird subject change and an image of bulimia around books and a cat and it just seemed odd to ...

I didn't use bland language when having my metaphors. It doesn't have to be a bunch of imagery to be complex language, that's different.