Purple

Thanks for this in-depth analysis! I appreciate it

I love all the imagery in this. This flows better than a lot of my own poems, and for that I am jealous, haha. The whole time I imagined a ...

I think if you wanted to take the approach of someone who darts between thoughts, then this poem might have to be much longer for that to be understood. Otherwise, ...

Thanks! I'll keep an eye out for you next time I'm scouring the green room!

Thanks for your review! The pause felt natural to me but if it's too noticeable then I might remove the comma.

Thanks for your super detailed review! I know the grammar isn't perfect but most poetry doesn't really follow the rules perfectly anyway. Also, I understand your confusion with my adjectives, ...

I said I was sorry for hurting your feelings. Why are you just dismissing my advice? The other reviewers said similar things to me and you seemed to listen to ...

The confusing parts that I pointed out were grammatical issues. I'm sorry if my review hurt your feelings, but I, as a reviewer, of course shared my personal opinion about ...

Thanks for the review! You got the first stanzas in the way I intended them, but the following ones were meant to be metaphorical and don't need a direct description ...

I totally get what you are saying. I guess I didn't really realize how scattered this poem was since my work isn't usually like this. My poems are usually negative ...

Okay so it seems like your review doesn't have a clear responce. You pointed out your favorite stanza but then critique it? Sorry if I'm mistaken but I am 1000 ...

Thanks for your advice! While I see what you are saying, I intentionally put them out of order. This wasn't to purposely mess with anyone's OCD but just to intertwine ...

This is about self harm and I have never directly experienced acupuncture. It was not meant to be accurate because it is a metaphor. You took it seriously because you ...

Thank you for the kind review! And yes this was meant to have a definite sadness or morbid feel to it.

I apologize for not responding earlier, whoops! I think this definitely hasn't been my strongest or longest poem, but I do think that the question in the middle is completely ...