Psychotic

Hehe thanks for the positive review! This actually happened to me a little over a year ago. Hence the title: A Memory.

Thank you for the constructive criticism! It really helps. When I meant familiar, I meant that I had been to a funeral before. I know I didn't make it that ...

lmao it's cool

Lol thank you!

I revised it a little. Does it sound better to you?

The little dashes are personal info, so I just kind of blotted them out. And I'll see if I can make the beginning a little clearer. But thanks for the ...

Thanks! I'll try to incorporate that into my future short stories!

Thank you so much for the feedback! I'll try to keep your advice in mind as I write more.