PsyLynx

oh also, this poem is now published in a poetry collection of mine; i've published seven poetry collections. Ho hum. Good stuff.

lol, well, i still have that email address and got a notification that for the first time in about a decade i got a message. I didn't intend this to ...

Allah, I pray vengeance... Allah, I pray compassion for those who've learned to hate (I'm paraphrasing, it's not showing me the poem...) yeah, shove it, hypocrit and twerp.

It doesn't mean anything, does it?

All I can say is... wow.

yeah, well, nuts to your white mice.

hehe, thanks pal.

very sexy, I like it a lot. Not too short, at all. You said enough, and said it well.

you didn't get the brain-thing at all. He didn't splatter his brains. He thought he did, but his gun was a girl's hand, and he was too high to realize ...

very very beautiful...the rhythm by the end of the poem made me stop reading the poem, though, and made me read the rhythm...if you know what I mean. Also, I'm ...

It wasn't supposed to be weird. It just worked, when read aloud. Maybe awkward when read, oh well.

Sorry, this post was contrary to two rules of YWS, including swearing and behaviour to other members and has been edited out. Firestarter.

I... am not allowed, by pride, to like any poem named "For Jesus" ... with that said, good poem, I liked it.

oh, in case anyone else ever looks at these, I should say that... I wasn't the person who invented the flaming pie image. Paul McCartney did, and he named an ...

That's...awesome. So good that I actually finished reading it and decided to comment on it. That's rare. And I love this.