Prosithion

Thanks for the crit. On the matter of salutations in the military, I was in the Coast Guard, and we were either required to call our superior NCO's either 'sir', ...

thanks a ton for the crit. To answer your quandary, Abney becomes very important later on. You are right, however. It does seem like a lot of unnecessary info. As ...

Hmm, I liked this poem a lot. It seemed to flow well. It's a little depressing, but that's ok. I don't really have any complaints, which is rare for me. ...

Thanks for the Crit. I'll update it when I can. I might post scene 2 tonight or maybe tomorrow morning. Thanks again, Pros

Fog hung on the streets of Sector 33. Big Ben sounded in the distance echoing through out the thin alleys, and brick covered buildings. Gideon walked down the barren street, ...

How is this science fiction?

I suggest The Possessed , by Dosteovsky. A brilliant book. (be prepared for verbosity beyond your wildest dreams. But it's a very good book none the less.) -Pros

to understand the last parts, you have to read the first four. That explains the colors and the war. I suggest reading the other parts. That might help clarify this ...

The story takes place in 1812. hope it helps. ^_~

well, I've been reading a lot of Russian liturature, and this is the general style in which most of it is written. So, the last paragraph is styled like the ...

very nice. rhythym and all, but good none the less.

thanks well, my idea was that a virus gets into the AI. Probably should have put that in, huh ^_~

O.O Please stop writing that kind of stuff. It's very profane, and as Magicman said, it's unpleasant.

Thank you very much, Fand.

I thought that this poem was rather lacking, sorry. It seemed to meander and I never really got the point of the poem. It wasn't bad, just it didn't make ...