ProfessorRabbit

Anne Rice is evil. I'd recommend Laurell K. Hamilton's series about Anita Blake. The first book is called "Guilty Pleasures." The books get pretty sexualized farther along in the series, ...

Brigitte vanished into the darkness of the forest. "Brigitte! Please!" Reinhard called from the upper story of the castle. I'd put the first sentence as its own paragraph. This whole ...

051. Yesterday The rain thrummed on the cottage roof and trickled down the window, making tiny clear trails on the glass. The "clear trails" bit bothers me a little. The ...

In the magical forest where animals could talk and play, Paddy, The friendly rabbit, "The" should not be capitalized. One day they were in a field of tall, green grass ...

There are some doings that cannot be undone, some mistakes that cannot be unmade, some decisions that you just can’t go back on. Good, strong beginning. This was one of ...

The body dropped with a sickening splat inside the plastic bag that contained it, conjuring up the most unpleasant recent memories Cadel Lorens had ever had the misfortune to remember. ...

She hurried through the streets, hands stuffed into the pockets of her heavy coat; a stream of frosted breath following her trail. Either change "following" to "followed" or change the ...

The hovering moonlight shone over her, and it was clearly seen that it was a girl, with long dark hair and a pale face. Seen by whom? I'd reword since ...

Cherubim laughed wildly while he played whit the Apple. Typo. "Whit" should be "with." That was something Michael would never understand: Being three thousand years old, Cherubim always behaved like ...

Amber was poised in a fashion that appeared both intensely comfortable and alluring. Her long legs could be seen, peaking out from behind the large, rosewood desk, as glossy as ...

Long overdue, and somewhat chatty, here's my review: The paint came out of the tube in thick globs, the brick red color falling onto the palette in its respective circlet. ...

“Is—is it on? I can’t tell…” “Yeah. Doesn’t that red light on the camera mean that it’s on?” “I dunno. No one ever told me. Oh! Wait. It says it’s ...

I don't usually bother to read books like this. What's the point? All it does is make you feel bad, and it has little - if any - impact on ...

Still with the untranslated titles, I see. Well, I guess I'll just give up on that one. :P If I really wanted to know what they said, I could paste ...

Hmm, I see you don't have any reviews. :( I just thought I'd let you know that the rules of this site state that you should post reviews on two ...