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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Chemical's React

    Hey Kandice, welcome to YWS! :D This is a nice story - short, sweet and innocent, like first love. :3 I just have a couple nitpicks: - The entire first ...

    Jun 20, 2010
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read

    Vampires? Seriously! How cliche! *rolls eryes and makes gagging nose* They didn't become cliche until SM started the craze. ;) When I was about eight I read this book called ...

    Jun 20, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Viscous Memories

    Hello, fellow Alabamian. :) Reading this, it's immediately obvious you have a huge talent for words. It's poetic, even seems to have rhythm. The problem is (at the risk of ...

    Jun 20, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Ellipsis

    Hello. This is my first review. (: Starting out, there's a lot of spelling and grammar errors: Ellipsis. 56 L incoln street, N.Y. My first gig in months. Me and ...

    Jun 17, 2010


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