PrincessOfDarkness

Haha. Cedric and As! XD Your gonna have to bring in Iris and Ash and the rest, because if we could make a story out of our RPG this would ...

Haha. I so agree, Dani ... >.

:D Thankyou. Well, Sleeping Beauty tied in with the thorns. :D But thank you anyway!

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Apple meant Storybooks, not SubjectBlue xD

:D Thanks. I'll have to think about it. I was really annoyed with what he said, and I wrote this whilst I was annoyed, so I kind did it in ...

It's OK. It's basically because I don't want other people to think I'm over-draumatic and I don't move the story on. So ... I quit. It's OK you asked. I ...

"Do you think we should bring anything?” I asked Jonah. We were back at the house, getting ready to leave; I grabbed my backpack while whilst Jonah thought. “Probably, just ...

Thanks for your review Dudette and sargsauce. (What competition is the review for?) Yeah, I understand, but unlike cC's, you twos wasn't as ... nasty really. Thanks again, and I ...

Oh, and since it is a Novel, you need to put in the title, Chapter 1.

There were two people in the forest, the "writer" and his best friend. I didn't want to really go: I saw this, I saw that... because that is all I'd ...

Thanks Dudette! I appreciate the nitpicks- I've only just grasped the speech comma and full stop buisness, for some reason I just couldn't quite understand it. I was very iffy ...

Thanks for your review! It was for a contest with a word limit, so I was going to extend it but decided not too, but I have an idea forming ...

567ajt, Now why would I do that...? Well, I'll have to feed someone else to them, then. Nom nom nom. It was about how he loved her, yet she thought ...

I'VE JUST RE-READ SOME REVIEWS AND I WANT TO MAKE SOME THINGS CLEAR. WHEN I FIRST WROTE THIS, IT HAD A TITLE PAGE, INCLUDING WHO'S POV IT WAS AT WHAT ...