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Re: Imaginary: Part 2
AAAAAAARGH! MOOOOOOOOOOOOORE! Unlike the first comment, I am threatning you to write a third part! :D Haha! This is great! I noticed a lot of giggling, it got on my ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Dark Past: Part 1
If you can take constructive criticizim, open the spoiler: Where was the Drug part going? I didn't understand that bit. I think that if you perfected some spelling mistakes, and ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: [Post Deleted]
Wow. This was great! I can see about the similarities between our styles. This is an awesome vampire story...are you planning on continuing it? I hope so. I'd love to ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: The_Spy_Who_Loved_Her
It was good, but don't fall into the trap I do a lot. You needn't have put a capital letter on goodbye, unless it was: "Goodbye," He said reluctantly, kissing ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: Life
Hey. This is really good! :D Each has different colour; Blue, green, orange and red. In my opinion, I think it would flow better: Each has different colour;Blue, green, orange ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: Revelations of a condemned being
This is really good! I liked your style, but I also liked the idea behind it. They concoct tales of monsters and the terrifying %u201CGrim Reaper%u201D, but what they don%u2019t ...
Jun 20, 2011