PrincessOfDarkness

You know what? I'm not even going to bother reviewing this. It's great, but you ned to believe in yourself. It's really starting to infuriate me the fact that after ...

Nitpicks ¬ You Can Say I'm Crazy But I Don't Want Love I'm Too Young For Love I Go Crazy Everyday I Don't Have Love I Wish I Had Love ...

Sol and I sit down at a table near the window in the large cafeteria. Sol has his tray piled high with food, whereas I have hardly anything, save for ...

A bit of a waste of space: I don't think half the people actually know what you're going on about. It's only been liked; people know you and your nickname ...

Things I liked Things to improve Grammar M.I.A I fell asleep with your heart in my hand, and awoke to your hips pressed against mine. You COULD capitalise this, but ...

Not only was my sleep terrible that cold Winter (It doesn't need to be a capital) evening, so were my dreams. Through them I shook and rolled all around my ...

I wasn't much of a party goer or a school dance attendee but today I was excited to go to the ball. I know I said that I wasn't so ...

Prologue Tony Centered, maybe? Leaving town was not the mistake, leaving her there was. All alone with nothing but the memories haunting her. But I couldn’t stay. Couldn’t live in ...

Creeping & crawling thru the darkness. onward ever trudging thru the mud. Lost to a world the light and life.deeper into darkness I go never wanting the light at all. ...

"Do you think we should bring anything?” I asked Jonah. We were back at the house, getting ready to leave; I grabbed my backpack while whilst Jonah thought. “Probably, just ...

The warm sun on my face woke me up. Sighing in content, I rolled over and stretched. No fragments of memory this morning- my night had been peaceful and dreamless ...

The thick misty fog distracted my sight, although magic helped it get become clear again , I couldn’t deny the fact that I am nervous. My white , golden hemmed ...

Man , was she a sight standing there in a black camisole, faded shorts and cowboy boots. The light breeze caught hold of her hair, lifting pieces into the air. ...

Fingers shattered and legs covered with scars Faces dripping with spots and surrounded with marks I can hear the slight thumps pulsing in my heart Question is- when will it ...

“You had me worried there for a while , little sister.” “I-I'm sorry. I don't mean to-” I stopped. Realising what I had just said. I had apologised. Apologised. I’d ...