Princess

Wow! Day, this is awesome! I totally loved it! I will point out a few things that need fixing. They all had multiple colored hair, Keyan’s was blonde and black, ...

These poems are very good.. I enjoyed them. There were a few parts that I must point out though. Firstly, if you rhyme two lines, then keep up the rhyme ...

Brick by brick, these walls are coming down. Dust filled air clogs my lungs, am I breathing? I cough, sputter, and gag again, feeling the gritty texture in my mouth. ...

Hey kris! This is another one of your greatest poems! I really enjoyed this one. Flipped him on his side. The "F" should be lowercase The his beak motioned, I ...

Hello!!! You give a review, you get one back :D I thought this poem was a very interesting piece, and the word choice is very good. There was one thing ...

Hey Henry, and welcome to YWS! This is a very well written piece! You are a natural at poetry, although, there were some points that bugged me. Firstly, you must ...

Hmm this is a very interesting topic to write about. I think you have the difficulty of sculpting perfectness down, but this poem seems a little off to me. His ...

Hi and welcome to YWS.. I can see that this is your first poem, so i shant go very hard on you.. Although, the thing that bugs me about this ...

i find this a little difficult to critique.. I'm not sure why.. but it has good potential but im not sure about it.. It needs much more detail and it ...

Wow! This is the most unique and interesting poem i have ever read. Being in the opposite genders position was genius! The only critique i can give you is that ...

This poem is very good, it expresses the feeling of loneliness and obsession. I enjoyed it very much.. The only thing that bugged me is that in the second stanza, ...

Hmmm..Angry Eh? I'm sorry, but this poem seems just a tad bit cliche.. You start almost every line with "I" and even though you say different things each line, you ...

Wow!! this is very good.. This is coming from an actor when i say that i want to be in this play!!!!!!!!! There is one thing thats bugging me.. It ...

Hia and Welcome to YWS!!!! Im glad that you are posting your work, but i think you should review some stories and poetry before you post any more.. As for ...

Wow.. im feel sorry for those girl's parents.. but this poem is very very good.. The only problem i have with it is that its waaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too short.. other than ...