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Hi there, I loved this. It was so well-written. I didn't see anything wrong with it; I love your style. Everything was just so realistic, and I loved the way ...

Hi there, This was really eerie, and creepy. Well done!! The description was perfect, it's like I was there with the character, seeing, hearing and smelling everything she did. Awesome. ...

Hey there, This was a very powerful, very emotional piece. Very beautiful. :) Only thing I don't like are the ellipses. Avoid ellipses in a story as much as you ...

Hola! Firstly, let me get this out. I LOVE THAT SOONGG!!! Ah-hem. Secondly, this might be a late review..? Oh well. Points for Team Red!! I remember when I first ...

Hey there! We were walking along the sidewalk, heading to our favorite coffee place. You were in your summer clothes, with bright colors of yellow and blue. I remember how ...

Hi there! It's me from the Religious Discussion Club. :P I loved this, it was funny, witty and interesting. Your style is awesome. Just have a few nitpicks though. godsdamned ...

Hi there, I liked this. Sorry, I didn't see anything wrong with it, except for the fact that it could have been longer, with a little more description so we ...

Hola!! I really liked this. The other reviews say you don't have a purpose, I didn't see that. *shrugs* The dialogue was really nice, very realistic. I love the ghost, ...

Hi there!! Firstly, I think you should keep the title. :) I don't know about everyone else, but it hooked me in. It was like, 'Huh? What's this about?' “I’m ...

Yo. Okay, I found this really cheesy and somewhat unrealistic, but maybe that's just me. *shrugs* In the beginning, you switched from present to past. Just look it over and ...

Hiya, This was so awesome! It was very well-written; so cuuute. The ending was very sweeet. :) Oh, and I love the title. The only thing I had a problem ...

Heya, xD Okay. Funny ending. Although I don't know why, I expected it to have a sad conclusion. Can't explain it. o.O In the other hand she carried her purse, ...

Hi there! This was really good. I didn't see anything wrong with it, except..could be just me, but I think you needed a little more description, especially when she was ...

Hola! Welcome to YWS! ^.^ I woke up to the sound of birds chirping. I didn't like this for a beginning. It's cheesy and cliche. Hopefully, if when I wake ...

Hi there!! Welcome to YWS. :) Firstly, I think you should just post one chapter at a time, cause otherwise the post gets too long and some people (like me) ...