Priceless

Hi there ^.^ So...I liked this idea, the theme is awesome, but you brought in too much stuff that just distracted me from the theme. I'll go through it and ...

Hey there!! Drake is dead. I see it all again: the melancholy way he spoke at our last meeting, that night where I had to pick him up because he ...

Hey there :) I didn't want them to see the true me, look into my soul. No one needed to know just how upsetting my life was. Would she really ...

Heya! Your magnificent face held a sad smile, the very one from that day... the day you said goodbye. Don't use ellipses in a story, ever. It screams amateur. there ...

Hey there! This was very sweet. :) Your writing flowed very well. Your characters were awesome, you really made me care about them and what happened to them. Just a ...

Heya!! Just a few typos and stuff: Every time she saw Luke's face in the hallway, with its his knowing and triumphant grin adorning it no comma here and recognized ...

Hey there! I loved this. At first I was like 'Huh? GIRLS fighting?' Pretty unusual and unique! Nice one. :) Your imagery was awesome, I could see everything going on ...

Aloha. ^.^ I pretty much second RangerHawk. xD The message (kindness) was freaking awesome, but the writing itself needs a lot of work. Not to be rude, but it sounds ...

Hey there! I'm Priceless and I'll be your reviewer this evening. :D A large man with a gaping whole in his chest was laying on the floor, trying to pull ...

Hola! ^.^ My right side felt warm and moist as I held it. Huh? He was holding his right side? The interloper froze in shock, as I lifted off the ...

Hey there! Should this really be in action...? Ollie heard Adylyn giggle. "I've never been happier," she whispered; Ollie peered around the corner and saw her biting her lip. "Just ...

Hola! “We need to talk,” Alex started and I knew she was right, right because I knew something happened to me when I saw him that night, I did things ...

Hey there, So I was just stalking your portfolio today. :P I really liked this. Your writing flowed very well; it was a very interesting idea. But I would like ...

Hey there! I really liked this, it was a nice, lighthearted, easy read. But, maybe I'm just dumb, but I didn't get why you/she hated painting her/your nails. Cause if ...

Hey there! I loved the title, it really drew me in. Your writing was awesome. I could clearly see everything going on; it was mesmerizing. Loved it. Girl in the ...