Priceless

Okay, this is my first time writing any romance. Please be brutally honest. Also, I need advice. This story is written in third person point of view, but I want ...

Yeah, so, just spoke to this really special guy for the first time in like two years, so...just felt like writing this. It's short, I know, but it's just everything ...

'Ha! What can she do? She can’t even peel an onion!'The words ring in my head. Again and again. I cover my ears, trying to shut out the sound. I ...

Spoiler! : Just posted this to prove that real crappy fanfiction exists. o.O Inspired by the song "What Have You Done?" by Within Temptation Hermione held out her wand with ...

“Malfoy?”Draco could not keep his hand steady as he pointed the wand at her. Tears welled up in his gray eyes. She stood as still as a statue, horrified brown ...

Spoiler! : Rip it apart, guys. I think there's a problem, the italics thing isn't working properly, so the whole part from "Serena, why did you do it?" to "We ...

Spoiler! : Hiya..I'm not sure whether this should be in romance, fantasy or just other. It involves a vampire, and one of his skills, so..yeah. Erm..don't be too harsh? xD ...

“So. Guess this is goodbye.”“Yeah.”He rocked forward on his heels, hands stuffed in his pockets, staring at the pavement. She stood outside the taxi, drumming her manicured nails on the ...

Hi guys! Please please review this xD And could I please get some input on the ending? I think the last paragraph sucks, and the ending is too abrupt...so, advice ...