Pretzelstick

*gives this paper 1000x likes*

It seems like I already reviewed this,one long time ago ;). I will move onto the next chapter.

This whole story has an air of suspense and mystery that you added to it, and well, may I say. ;)

Thank you! I will work on those nitpicks.

*Ping*

Thanks so much Pomp1 (just noticed that we are both on team P names-which I find a rare jewel among YWSers) But I gotta say that the letter P is ...

Oh ok, take your time ;)

Sorry that was a random emoji and I didn't mean it.

You did it May 3rd.:x

Ping!

Thanks for you long reply, but it was quite hard to read because of the % signs. I will try to reply to your points though. Anyways, I was doing ...

Sorry if I didn't make that clear cause of typos. You put the text in between in the coding of the quote. So it should look like this: Put your ...

Heya. I have a hard time reading this because I don't see the difference between the quotes directly from the next. Here is how to code it: [quote][/quote] If you ...

Well, I think that you interpreted my story wrong. These aren't aliens, they are astronauts with advanced top-secret satellite technology in their hands. That's not cliche, I don't think so. ...

I personally liked her review more then your work JadeFox.