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  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: So, like, if I could sing people would like me?

    I love to sing alot but that doesn't make me popular.I usually don't sing in front of people:-).

    Jan 6, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: No World for Villains

    Okay,it's still a little bit confusing to me but as long as you know what you area writing that is fine with me.

    Jan 6, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: No World for Villains

    I agree,from experience I can say as a reviewer,you can't be general bit you have to be have to be very specific and even give exact quotes. This review i ...

    Jan 6, 2015
  • Poetry » Culture, Spiritual Re: Teacher's Pet

    This poem really spoke to my heart, and I could really relate to it because I was always the quiet, jerky teacher's pet. It's such a sweet poem that encourage ...

    Jan 5, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Shades of White part 2

    Thanks, I really try to make my reviews short and meaningful but also have top-quality.Thanks and keep on writing!

    Jan 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Project: LOVE [Chapter 12.2 - Revised & Edited]

    Yeah,when you update I could re-do my review!

    Jan 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: Strawberry Hearts -7-

    You exactly said it. Gosh is a substitute for God so you ARE still using his name in vain. Please don't fool around with the truth.I'm sorry about favorite and ...

    Dec 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: Blackbird Singing Chapter 4

    You're very welcome,but I am sorry to say that the three other editors didn't really do a good job of editing if I found ten mistakes. I am sorry but ...

    Dec 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 37

    About the question make,I stress this to all writers never use slang because it makes your story look childish and very unprofessional.Hope that helps and Happy New Year!

    Dec 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Second Always Comes Last: Red-Like-Carmine

    I'm sorry for that mistake again. In the U.S. the preferred spelling is favor but again assuming that you live outside of the U.S. you can properly spell it favour.Sorry ...

    Dec 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Second Always Comes Last: Symbols

    Okay,I'm sorry.I live in the U.S. and here the preferred spelling is honor, and I am assuming that you live outside the U.S. so in your country the preferred spelling ...

    Dec 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: LAPIS :Chapter 25:

    Maddie,I just have to say that using slang or curse words is non-excusable. There is absolutely no excuse to it and I think if you use it in your writing,it ...

    Dec 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Forestlore Ch. 4: Histories

    Yes,next time please make a note to read the before chapters in order to understand this one. I was out of the context so I 'm sorry if some of ...

    Dec 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Theatre Re: Where the Black Sheep Wrest - (Ch. 16) Part 2: Two-bit Bridle

    Yes,just leave it at would you said above: "But nobody was listening to Snagglebeak's unprompted backstory." (but just saying back story is two separate words so please disconnect them).You are ...

    Dec 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Second Always Comes Last: Phone Call

    The girl with the orange hair who knows the secret behind sir's sucide.The main character.

    Dec 28, 2014


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