Pozoe12

that was a pretty good story. I liked how there was this whole conflict going on in the main character, how she wanted to love James but at the same ...

this was a great story. i'm intrigued now! hope you continue this i think a lot of other people agree 8) :wink:

its great but i think its got some work. like your second reviewer, i'd like to know more about the relationship between kira and justin. is their banter about being ...

hey, this is definitely not a failed piece! i saw what u wrote on one of ur other stories, n that's not true! i loved it. u described the characters ...

I luv it. but a lot of times when you finish dialogue, you go ." He. sry if thats confusing, but if you write dialogue and you don't need an ...

okay, that was pretty good. at first, i thought it was a little strange that you were like acting like the reader was actually with you, but now i actually ...