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Re: Short Elf story
Hello there! Here are some statements that should be edited. "They're moving," she whispered thrashing back her long hair. * it should be period not comma. "The map has to ...
Mar 20, 2009
Hello there! Here are some statements that should be edited. "They're moving," she whispered thrashing back her long hair. * it should be period not comma. "The map has to ...
Mar 20, 2009