Polkadots

I liked the story. As the person said above you give off a lot of amazing imagery and your protagonist is quite relateable. You had a nice hook and your ...

I think this was written very well, and I love the story of Perseus also. The only thing that I didn't quite like was the Point of View. It was ...

Starting out with conventions, your sentence structure has a slight variation but it leans more on the uniform side. You might want to combine your sentences a bit more to ...

I found this piece to be rather dry. It lacks any sort of description and lacks any figurative language or adjectives. I think you tell too much rather than show/guide ...

I think it's an interesting concept, but it seems a bit like an info-dump to be also. Is this meant to be a prologue or just a chapter or a ...

I enjoyed your story. Your descriptions are quite vivid - especially in the second world. The descriptions were precise and well-worded and flowed well and gave amazing imagery. I could ...